After showing our teacher our teen film opening so far she was impressed with what we have made and gave us some feedback on what we can do do improve it.We were told that some jump cuts didn't need to be edited so we took consideration and kept then.
We were also told that there is a slight confusion at the end of our sequence which meant that it wasn't easy to identify what happened to the nerd as to why he was kicking the car tire.I believe that we will delete this scene to avoid any confusion for our viewers.as we think it would be impossible for our actor to fall off the bike.As this would be quite humiliating for the person we think its best to remove the footage of that scene.Which leave us at a comfortable duration of time just over 2 minutes.
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